relax, enjoy, feeling, enjoyment
the guitar plays, a soothing to the soul
followed by a sweet deep drum
marks my path
finally the voice
like birds chirping the morning
beauty
whether its Geddy Lee or Sting
harmony
harmony with the music
my potion
my cure
my enjoyment
my music
3 comments:
Capitalize the R
use the feeling instead of feeling
don't use harmony twice
last line should try to my life
You can call the poem whatever you want to you can change the name to call it something that doesn't involve poem
Very moving poem reid.
Your words all fall into place as if they shouldn't be moved. Don't we not think? I think you are the epitome. You can finagle because you wrote this poem. I wish you would write more about you and your gregariousness because then the poem would have been more relatable. You are the panacea to my sickness.you should perfunctory write more poems. Anyways, i will talk to you later.
Love,
Inde
stop trying to act smart
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